HEY GUYS, it's Senior Waldio today for *sigh* Adventure Time!(Depressed)(Cries Lightly) Is it annoying like the show, or does it rise above it televised counterpart. Let's jump right in!
Okay nice story and all, but where's the explanation. I HAVE NO IDEA WHO THESE PEOPLE ARE. Maybe include a prologue that elaborates on the origins of these two characters. Other then that, the story is nicely written with only minor errors.
Good? Short but sweet, it doesn't do it's job to well.
Hmm. I'll just move down to the characters sectio....WHERE'S THE DESCRIPTION? Not complete, I'M LOOKIN' AT YOU SUPOREIA MALDIO WURLD. Oh. It's there, but it's in black font. To see it, you have to look really hard. Also, MORE ANGRIER? HUH
Cool! Makes the game deeper!
Suffers from the same problem as the characters.
Interesting. Nice little section with content packed inside.
Only one picture?
Good, but the black text harms the games viewability. Some changes, and it could be a perfect game!